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GloPoWriMo 2023, Day 15, Life Weighs More Than Gold

Day Fifteen Prompt

I’m on the road, galavanting with my childhood bestie, so here’s a
post I prepared for you. Off prompt.

There's nothing I need more than you,
Safe and loved, right here in your bed,
I say to my son every night
As I bend to switch off the light
Not true, he retorts, half asleep
And the helm in my throat flip flops
Every night he's my little boy,
Every morn, he's more of the world

I pray the world keeps my boy safe
And all who belong to the world
Day by day, they outgrow their beds
Every sleep they need mothers less
May they yet have a place like home
Swathed in love, they've learned to impart
And life comes to be a safe port
For kids whose life weighs more than gold

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Selma Martin
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  1. Sadje

    I really like how you’ve equated every night’s sleep with the ever changing and growing of a child into adulthood.

    1. Selma Martin

      I’m so happy to know you read so closely, dear Sadje. Your words are a blessing always. Thanks dearest. XoXo

      1. Sadje

        You’re most welcome

  2. rajkkhoja

    Growing of a child into adulthood. Nice write up poem.

    1. Selma Martin

      I’m so happy you got that poem, dear Raj. Bless you. Xoxo

  3. Michele Lee

    I feel this one! Beautiful writing, Selma. 💞

    1. Selma Martin

      Aww. How happy to know it touched you, Michele Lee. Blessings.

  4. writerravenclaw

    My son has grown up, he will be 27 this year. There are days when I remember him as a little boy.

    1. Selma Martin

      I think we never forget. Never want to forget the time when we learned to care so much for a little human. What a happy journey! I loved that time. Thanks for reading and commenting. Blessing you. XoXo

  5. Selma, What a beautiful expression of Mother’s love! We all need each other’s love at any age, but as your poem teaches us, children also need to forge their independence. 🙂

    1. Selma Martin

      I had the time of my life with my little ones. All mothers do, I’m sure. It was a splendid learning experience. So happy you liked this one, Cheryl. Happy Sunday to you, my sweet friend.

  6. Ellie Thompson

    I love your poem, Selma. I found it so beautiful and relatable. My son is now 43! Nevertheless, I remember what it was like to stand and watch him sleep and having such a profound love for him. Naturally, I felt the same about my beautiful daughter, now 41. I can hardly believe they are so grown up now. I now find myself standing watching my grandchildren sleep with the same amount of love that I had/have for my children. Xx 🥰

    1. Selma Martin

      I think Mothers are amazing. And raising little ones softens and smoothens rough edges. And let’s the light filter in. Xoxo.
      Thanks for reading, dear Ellie. Blessing you.

    1. Selma Martin

      Wasn’t that a privilege, Lauren? I had a blast with raising these boys. And we never forget. Life is beautiful. Thanks for reading dear friend. XoXo

    1. Selma Martin

      Aww. We grow alongside them. Keep enjoying this precious time. Blessings, Yve. XoXo

  7. Bill

    A very heartfelt poem, Selma. Nicely done.

    1. Selma Martin

      Thanks, Bill. Thanks for saying that. Blessing you. Xo

  8. moniconunez0790

    Thank You Selma for a beautiful poem. It took me back to when my child was young! I love the way your words flow! Keep shinning.

    1. Selma Martin

      Monico, you beautiful human. What a lovely surprise. Your visits are precious, Amiga. I love you my sweet. Regards to the family. Always. And I bless you. Come again, please. Xoxoxoxox

  9. Dawn D. McKenzie

    As I watch my children slowly depart home on the daily, this poem really hit close to my heart.
    I don’t get much in ways of loving retorts, at the moment, they tend to come more as yells and demands. Ah! The joys of teenage!
    Thank you for this journey back in time
    XO

  10. Belladonna

    Hits me right in my heart! Beautiful poem.

    1. Selma Martin

      A good sign. There’s a big heart under that beautiful shell.

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