For #TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 328, 7/11/23, where we’re
exploring Sun, Sand & Sea with the main photo provided by photographer
Terri Webster Schrandt, from secondwindleisure.com.
Terri says: “This photo is a filtered version of a lifeguard station and red patrol
vehicle at Ocean Beach, San Diego, CA.”
Colleen says: “🖋️ Your poetry writing inspiration for this week is to use the photo
as your inspiration, but I want you to concentrate on imagery. Extra points if you
can work this phrase into your poem: “Sun, Sand, & Sea.”
Remember, if you write a freestyle poem, please add a syllabic poem to go with it.
What is imagery?
The Poetry Foundation defines imagery as:
“Elements of a poem that invoke any of the five senses to
Poetry Foundation.org
create a set of mental images. Specifically, using vivid or
figurative language to represent ideas, objects, or actions.”
Imagery isn’t focused on only visual impressions or mental images—it also includes
our sensory experiences, including internal emotions and physical sensations.
When we write poetry, we need to engage and use all of our senses. Visual images
often appear in our minds and are the easiest to add to your poem. But what do
you hear, smell, taste, or feel?
Far out in the fields,
blown in with the humid wind
sun, sand, and sea
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The Voice of July
how I remember its tone:
sun, sand, and sea
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Every summer day
sun, sand, blue sky, and the sea
how the heat lingers
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The sky in summer
one star unable to sleep
the sun, sand, and sea
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Sun, sand, and sea
all things in my view
are haiku
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© 2023 selmamartin
She’s fidgety and with a short attention span
Time passes as fast as a hummingbird flutters
At #tankatuesday, she feels like a hummingbird
gladly returning to her favorite flower.
© Selma
Here’s the reason why:
The digital version is available for preorder. Here’s the link.
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Thank you for reading, dear friends. I wish you miracles.
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Oh I love these Selma
Thanks, sweet Sadje. XoXo I want to read yours. XoXo
It’ll be posted today
Lovely this post. Beautiful words written in the Sun, Sand and Sea.
Thanks for reading, Raj. Summer ☀️ 🌊 🏖️
Most welcome, Selma
Bless you, dear friend. Xoxo
I really enjoyed this waterfall of poetry a joy to dive into.💜💜💜
Aww. So glad you did. Thanks.
I truly did 💜💜
I love ‘the sky in summer’ haiku the best –
Aww. Thanks Beth. Glad you found yours. XoXo
Beautiful! My favorite line is “one star unable to sleep”.
Heheh 😏 that one was cute. Thanks. Glad you liked it 👏🏽
Beautiful. I especially love the last two.❤️🙏🏼
Such fun to know you read. Blessings.
And to you.🙏🏼❤️
Well done on imagery and showing your love for haiku. LOL! 💚
Thanks Colleen. I do love it. Xoxo 😚
This is beautiful Selma!
Thank YOU 🙏
You’re welcome!
Loved reading through the haiku. It was sort of like a revolving door where everything gets refracted and revisited, if that makes sense! Really nice, Selma!
I love that revolving door. I couldn’t decide on one haiku 💭
Glad you liked. XoXo
Very nice, Selma!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Sweetness by you. Thanks. 💗
Fun poems, and you got “Sun, Sand, & Sea” in every time.
Yea I did 😃 Thanks, for reading, Marsha. Blessings.
You inspired me to write one short Haiku of my own.
Wonderful. I’ll read it 👏🏽
Thanks. It’s super short!
Lovely and – fun! 🌞
☀️ Yes. 💗 blessings
Really the true voice of July ❤️
You know it too. Wonderful 💕
We flutter throughout our lives. May we also settle, even for brief spells.
Best to you on your publication!!
“The voice of July” ~ Love that! 🌞
Thanks for saying. 💕
😊🦋🌻
Well done, Selma! ❤️
Thanks for saying dearest one. XoXo
You’re welcome, Selma. And I look forward to reading your book. 😊
You’re Tempe sweetest. I sure hope you enjoy it.
Stay in the shade. It’s so hot 🥵… blessings v
I just received it in the mail. I will take my time with it and soak in your beautiful words.
I’m definitely staying in the shade! I hope it cools down for us all soon!
Aww. 🎁 for you. Thanks for doing that, dear one. You’re precious. Take your time. Let me know when you find your poem. ✨ 💗 ✨
Absolutely gorgeous, Selma✨🖤✨
Lovely words, Jude. Xoxo
Jude ✨ 🖤 ✨
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and you check boxed all of the above.. gorgeous Selma
Thanks, Cindy. So happy you enjoyed these. It’s so hot. Stay cool.
You’ve captured the magic of summer by the water well with your series, Selma.
By the water well. I like how you see this, Lisa. Xoxo
Your poem definitely captures the imagination.
Capture! thanks for thinking it so. Blessings.
So so lovely, Selma!
<3
David
That star is like me. I cannot sleep if the light (sun) is on. 😜 I know that star’s feelings 👏🏽 glad you liked it David.
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