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Think Of This At Next Full Moon #dVerse #epiphany

 Dora, the guest host for today’s prompt at dVerse poetics, called us
fellow dVerse poets-in-arms and I felt she was talking to me too. So, I consulted
the stars and came up with this poem I hope is on point. See for yourself, please.

"Epiphany"

The rider praised the steadiness 
and thriftiness of his burro
the safest, sanest riding mount 
over the years,
except when the mount 
spooks at something
wherein she trips and pitches him
forward past her ears

Next thing the rider knows 
he's cursing litanies
not at burro but at the 
old McClellan bargain hunt 
hard as a rock, hard on the arse too-- 
that saddle, 
but the best choice at the dingy shop 
paid upfront 

Burro leads him off the road, 
closer to the meadow 
where wind and grass 
susurrate underfoot 
then, either burro doesn't know 
or this mule is on to something 
but his rider follows him
smack into the middle of a brook 

By and by, the rider suspires 
languishly in the water 
until finally, he unfolds 
like a new spring leaf
as with stronger discharge
from tidal oscillation 
the brook swells and
swallows his earlier grief

In the somnolence of the moment,
into his peripheral vision
shimmies a crystal torchlight
of translucent silver tulle 
as loud exhales tumble out 
he traces the light up, finds its source,
and in a cornucopia of pleasure
points & says with fervor to his mule:

the moon, look, look
the phenomenal moon, oh!
his enthusiasm draws the attention
of the rotund lady-lamp fazed
she smiles, instantly enraptured
like a mother observing her tod--
and with eyes enlarged, delighted 
stares at his perfection, amazed
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Please click on the dVerse link to read the lovely prompt.

In case you’re wondering, the Micro Beaver Full Moon/Frost Moon of November comes
at the end of this workweek– enjoy it, and as you do, please think of this perspective
about your imperfections and hardships.

Let me know what you thought in the comments, please. I’m so happy you read, and as
always, I wish you miracles.

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  1. Dora

    Selma,
    So glad you answered the call and oh what a treat you give us! The imagery is clearly realized here with overtones of desert dry dust and wind, underscored with notes of burro and leather, all overseen by a liquid moon that smiles in amazement, and not just in condescension. But really, so much to smile about in your poem!
    pax,
    dora

    1. Selma Martin

      Your prompt was tops. I appreciate it. And you. So glad you read all that into it. So right you are. He didn’t notice he was being watched. He was lost in his struggles. Like we are. But someone watches. And she: moon thinks we are the most perfect organisms. (Not smartest 🤣)
      Thanks so much for reading, Dora. xoxo

  2. Nope, Not Pam

    That’s gorgeous, I love how you e taken a simple moment and made it divine. It’s quite inspirational 🙂

    1. Selma Martin

      Thanks so dearly for reading and seeing divinity in it. xo

  3. Ain Starlingsson, forestbathing hermit

    Ah….this is the narrative style I aspire to….dosed just wonderfully; by that I mean the tone/style. A great yarn, but with lovely details and frustrations, all in a flow…..the mule, and the moon, both are not lost on me, and the fact that the mule is able to feel a certain divinity too, very clever, very caring, very interesting to say the least. So who is that rider of a mule. Whoever he may be, he is in great literary company. Of course I will read the poem a few times to squeeze all I can and collect the thoughts, and ultimately, in my naivity, what I enjoy about reading poetry is how accessible it is. In that you win, with the scenario, and movement keeping the focus.

    1. Selma Martin

      You left me speechless with your lovely words. Thanks most sincerely for taking the time to appreciate my words like you did. Your encouragement energizes me. Be well my friend. xoxo

  4. Daphny Aqua

    This is anabsolute treat Selma, you took me through a whole journey with your words. ❣️

    1. Selma Martin

      So glad my words did that to you. Thanks for reading. xoxo

  5. Ron Rowland

    Yes, I will think of this the next full moon.
    “the brook swells and swallows his earlier grief” is a magnificent line.

    1. Selma Martin

      Hi Ron. Thanks for visiting. Glad you took to those words. Bless you, my friends. xo

  6. Ingrid

    Heartwarming, Selma! ❤️

    1. Selma Martin

      Thanks so much for thinking it so. Be well, dear friend.

  7. anotherkatewilson

    Wow, this is wonderful! Brilliant story telling, and great imagery.

    1. Selma Martin

      Pleases me that you enjoyed this, Kate. Thanks for reading and commenting. xoxo

  8. Grace

    What a fantastic read Selma! So beautiful to behold the magnificent moon. I love this line: the brook swells and
    swallows his earlier grief.

    1. Selma Martin

      Grace, your comment pleases me. That line made a good impression. Thanks so much for pointing it out. Be well. xo

  9. rajkkhoja

    So beautiful training your words. I like

      1. rajkkhoja

        Welcome Selma..

  10. Patricia Furstenberg

    I enjoyed the scents, the tactile and the play on light and shadows, especially the moonlight.
    I’ll definitely look at the moon with different eyes now, and perhaps even feel like she takes notice of me too 🙂

    1. Selma Martin

      She notices. Trust me, she does. I’m so thrilled about all you enjoyed. Thank you.

  11. Jane Aguiar

    Wow! You narrated as a story. Love your poem,Selma! xoxo dear

    1. Selma Martin

      I love your enthusiasm. Thanks, Jane. Sweeet! 👏

      1. Jane Aguiar

        I’m always happy. Grab little happiness that comes on the way.💖My pleasure dear.

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