Written for Tanka Tuesday. Colleen’s Prompt:
Your subject of the poem must be a BIRD
This week’s challenge is to write an Imayo poem. Your subject must be about
a 🦃bird! 🐦⬛ It can be any type of bird. 🦉
This is a Japanese form that I learned about on the dVerse challenge last week.
Many thanks to Laura for the instructions and the introduction to the form. I’ve
added this new form to the challenge cheatsheet.
The Imayo
The imayo is comprised of four 12-syllable lines. Each line is divided into a 7-syllable
and a 5-syllable section, with a hard pause (or caesura) in between. The pause will
generally be represented by a comma, semi-colon, or similar punctuation.
- 4 lines (8 lines permissible)
- 12 syllables per line divided as 7-5
- make a pause space between the 7 and 5 syllables
- use comma, caesura or kireji (cutting word) as the pause
- no rhymes
- no meter
- no end of line pauses – the whole should flow together as though one long
sentence - The Imayo is a literal poem so do not use symbolism, allegory etc.
Here’s my poem from last week to use as an example:
- A literal poem with no symbolism, I wonder if this one, my very first attempt
at an Imayo, qualifies. We will see. - Also, there’s a bird in the featured image, only we cannot see it. *wink*
From treetop she calls to me, but shares not her face for the message she transports, needs wind to fly on and so I ready my heart, and set out two cups our anniversary drinks, will taste of birdsong © Selma
I hope you liked my first Imayo.
Thanks for reading.
I’m a simple woman who dares to see the beauty in ordinary. I’d love to connect with you and like pen pals, I want something beautiful to blossom between us. Will you join me? Selma is my middle name. Its meaning—peaceful, complete, are euphoric affirmations I like to think of myself as having. They compliment the joy I feel when I write. I sincerely hope you decide to join me on my writing journey. I Wish You Miracles.
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Clever, I enjoyed this
😜 sweet birdsong. 💗
Aww, so sweet.
Sweet: tweet 🐥 tweet 🐥
💕
🤍🤍🤍
I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the visit.
Glad you enjoyed, Rall.
Visiting: my pleasure. 👏🏽
wonderful and so sweet, Selma🤍✨
Tweet, tweet 🐦 🎶
That was lovely, Selma. It flowed beautifully and did the trick. You make this challenging form look easy. <3
Nice picture. Love of Imayo. From treetop she calls to me,
From treetop she calls to me,
Nice words.
Beautiful, Selma! I love the “taste of birdsong” ❤️
You and me both, then. hehe. We know what we talking ’bout. xoxo. Blessings.
Thank you, Raj. I’m so happy you enjoyed it. xoxo
Thanks so much for taking a peek at the poem. It’s a new on for me and I loved giving it a try. Happy Weekend.
You are sweet for saying that, D. Thanks. It was a challenging prompt. Glad I tried.
WP is at it again. Commenting takes a funny turn.
Thanks for visiting, D. And commenting. Blessings.
🙂 😀 I have a love/not-so-much-love relationship with WP.
I know that feeling.
When you comment I want to respond and want to make sure you receive my reply. So when it falls anywhere other than under your comment you don’t receive it.
That’s what was happening here.
But you got my message 😅 and I’m glad. Thanks for your sweet comment. Blessings.
<3
😜 from treetop she calls. 🎶
Thanks, Raj 🐦
You are most welcome!🦆
Thanks for the support dearest Raj. Glad you enjoyed it from treetop xoxo
You are sweet for saying that, D. Thanks. It was a challenging prompt. Glad I tried.
Great job, Selma. I love your lateral thinking.
Thanks, Robbie.
Your Imayo is superb! I think that is a cuckoo bird Selma. It can only be heard, not seen!
A cuckoo bird?! Yes, of course 👏🏽
Thanks for pointing that out, Balroop. You’re the sweetest.
No more wondering 💗
Blessings. XoXo 🤗
Eloquent, Selma! Heart touching! <3
Precious. Lady Cheryl 💕
Thanks.
A lovely Imayo Selma, capturing the moment beautifully ❤️
Thanks so much, Angela. I appreciate the encouragement. Blessings.
Lovely, I can almost hear the bird sing.
You can? Heather, that is so cool of you to say that. Thanks so sweetly. xoxo
Oh, I really love this.
You’re so sweet, Bridgette. Thanks so much. xoxo
Aw, that’s so pretty, Selma! Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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A joy you brought me, thanks, dearie. Blessing you. xoxo
What a sweet poem. You really conjured up the scene for me! XO
😜 thanks, Luanne. Glad you hopped on and let your mind take over. 😘
This is beautiful, Selma. I’ll do more research on this form. It’s an interesting form.
Thanks, Colleen. It was really fun. 👏🏽
I love this! I often sit hammocking wondering who is singing to me.