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Forward Going to The Rhythm of One Earth #poetry #mirroredrefrain

Unwieldy Nelle or Timorous Poet: Take-Two
Once a wannabe villanelle, now a mirrored refrain that made me work hard.

Except for the time my heart not yet knew yours,
When squalls deafened and pierced my aching heart
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth

The whole day through my soul adores you now
From amethyst morn past the lilt of afternoon
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon

But for the time that passed me fleeting
Cocky was I pretending I was so smart
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth

Hail to the sun — gives life, our faith remains true,
Praise to puddles that mirror light like silver spoons
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon

I cannot imagine how I lived without you
Not for a moment from you be apart
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth

Like condor wings, gliding, soaring, we come through
Immune from imbalance, hearts in tune
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon

Enraptured in music borne of stardust and morning dew
I look to us for daysprings of togetherness in every restart
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth

May I never awake any dawning feeling blue,
Nor lay me to sleep without you in shadows of the moon
Forward going to the rhythm of one earth
Never to revert, lest hearts start to swoon.

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Giving the form another go…(and then another. Thanks, David)

“Experience comes from bad judgment.” ~ Mark Twain quote

Mirrored Refrain 

The Mirrored Refrain is rhyming verse form constructed by Stephanie Repnyek.
The poem is formed by three or more quatrains where two lines within the
quatrain are the “mirrored refrain” or alternating refrain.

Mirrored Refrain  
The rhyme scheme is as follows: 
xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB, etc... 
x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem.
A and B represent the refrain. 

Example: 
Child of His Earth 
by Stephanie Repnyek

Please click this link to read the poem example. 
(First provided by dVerse). 

Participation is closed now at dVerse, but I had to give it a try.

The challenge WAS: 
Write a poem in mirrorred refrain form. You choose your theme,
and refraining lines following the stanza structure as described.

I appreciate the challenge.
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  1. ben Alexander

    Selma, this is lovely 💘
    I think every second line is supposed to rhyme with its fourth line.

    1. Selma Martin

      What a blessing you are, David. Thanks so much for helping out. I’ve adjusted accordingly. I swear, I struggled with this form. No excuses. I thank you for setting me straight. (Pingback: mentioned you *heart*) I bless you. Be safe.

  2. Gurpreet Dhariwal

    I loved this poem a lot. Represents you the way you are my friend 🙂

    1. Selma Martin

      Aww. I’m honored by your kind words. Thanks for the visit. ♥️ 💃🏼 👏

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