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Day 7: NaPoWriMo 2024–Wish You Were Here

Day Seven
on APRIL 7, 2024

Happy first Sunday of Na/GloPoWriMo, all. Let’s give ourselves all a virtual round of applause for making it
through the first week of the poem-a-day challenge!

Our featured participant today is Oregano Oranges, where you’ll find a response to Day 6’s “weird wisdom”
prompt that places a unique spin on telling a lie.

Today’s featured resource is theheartofpoems, an Instagram account featuring both poetry and art.

And last but not least, we’re taking it easy with today’s (optional) prompt. Today, we’d like to challenge you
to write a poem titled “Wish You Were Here” that takes its inspiration from the idea of a postcard. Consistent
with the abbreviated format of a postcard, your poem should be short, and should play with the idea of travel,
distance, or sightseeing. If you’re having trouble getting started, perhaps you’ll find some inspiration in these
images of vintage postcards.

Happy writing!


Wish You Were Here

Where you travel I cannot follow
I’m not welcomed yet in the valley, 
So I’ll gawk at the cherry blossoms 
Recalling last year, oh, Lilly!
How I wish you were here with me…

As I regard the blooms heartbroken
My eyes catch a laced vapor trail 
Promptly, the blue wind softens,
Opens the thin-laced veil 
You’re here! Waving to me from heaven.

© selma

Thanks for reading my Day 7 poem.
I hope you can view and enjoy the sounds in this short video I took at the park.

Sounds at the park. Video by Selma.
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This Post Has 26 Comments

  1. kim881

    Your poem is so heartfelt and touching, Selma. I’m so sorry for the loss of your friend.

    1. Selma Martin

      Thanks for saying that dear Kim. I appreciate you. 🥹

  2. Sadje

    This is so moving and evocative poem Selma. Hugs dear friend

  3. rajkkhoja

    Heart touching words written you.

      1. rajkkhoja

        Most welcome, dearest,Selma😍

      2. rajkkhoja

        Wonderful all nature beauty slide pic,(13). I like. Where’s places?

  4. Mike U.

    Beautiful, deeply moving words, Selma. I’m terribly sorry for your loss, my friend.

    1. Selma Martin

      You’re special for saying. Thank you. Losing a friend is hard.

  5. beth

    i’m sorry for your loss, but know you will always be connected in your heart

  6. VJ

    Such a tender poem. The video did not work for me unfortunately

  7. sgeoil

    A very tenderhearted poem. And heartwarming when the “blue winds soften, Opens the thin-laced veil”.

  8. Robbie Cheadle

    This is very lovely and quite poignant too 💖

  9. Destiny

    a beautiful and touching share, Selma.🤍🙏

    wonderful images (unable to view the video)

  10. D. Wallace Peach

    How lovely, Selma. Sad with longing and beautifully peaceful and accepting of the mysteries of death – all that the same time. Happy Napowrimo!

  11. dorahak

    So very lovely, Selma, especially liked these lines: “My eyes catch a laced vapor trail/Promptly, the blue wind softens” — blue wind, love it.

  12. Maria Michaela

    Awww Selma. What a beautiful heartfelt poem. A beautiful way to remember your friend. 🥹🩷

    Thanks for the video and photos. The sakuras are stunning! 🌸

  13. Belladonna

    Your opening line is beautiful and thought it was leading to the afterlife and there it was, exactly what I thought. Now I’m in tears!!! This was so beautiful!

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