When horses run, they leap, touch down, just to repeat
Like our lives moving, leaping between highs and lows
To aim to delay touch downs is life’s true sorrow
Best to lift others on downs and prompt to complete
Like our lives moving, leaping between highs and lows
When horses run, they leap, touch down, just to repeat
Copyright ©️ selma 2024
Good morning everyone. Here I am trying to beat the clock on this happy Friday morning. This post is for Dora, prompt host at dVerse.
Thanks for reading.
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A lovely, wise, flowing-with-the-rhythm-of-running-horses and life itself, briolet, Selma. I love how it functions as a whole, a circle circumscribing a golden truth, “Best to lift others on downs and prompt to complete.” And around this nugget, the words cluster like light in the darkness, in spite of the downs “to leap” forward. What a blessing to read last thing this evening! Thank you.
Beautiful every line. Amazing horse running rythem. Indeed sounded!
Thanks for getting that rhythm Raj. Happy 😊 you read. Xo
Me too, Selma
Your third eye, stellar. Thanks. When seen through your eyes makes me look as if I had it all figured out. (Which I don’t. I merely line words up. Remember the squirrel post? Haha, that’s still me). Thanks for the lovely prompt. Thanks for the encouragement most of all. Blessings on your weekend, Dora. XO
always moving ahead
That’s it. Always moving ahead. And when we can lift others up to keep moving. Xo, Beth
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What an evocative write, Selma! Enjoyed leaping and running with the horses.
So pleased b you enjoyed it dear friend. Thanks for being here. Blessing you
You are so welcome.
With every line I could see horses run, they leap, touch down, just to repeat.
Beautiful!
A beautiful comment that will take me a long way. I’ll keep running. Thanks so dearly my friend. You’re beautiful.
Prego, cara mia!
Beautifully written Selma.
Thanks, Sadje. Happy you liked it. 🤗
My pleasure dear friend
Oh I love this poem and your beautiful lines, Selma. Tht’s exactly what then do as do well💕
Wonderful!!👏
I’m delighted you read and liked it dear Cindy. I remember your story about the unicorn 🦄 that came to visit you. Wow…
Stay cool on this Friday yay yay day. 👏🏽 🪇 still shaking them
It was majestic and I loved the unicorn story too. Thanks for remembering! 🩷🙏happy Friday-Yayyy, Selma!! 🩷
This is so uplifting 🙏
Thank you Selma
Maggie, I’m so happy you found it uplifting. I aim to have you levitating with joy and hope 🥹
Blessings you have a gorgeous weekend. Xoxo
Awww indeed I am sure I can do that, or try x
Thank you Selma 🙏
I wish you the same xo
Lovely, your horses have the best idea.
Thanks dear Diana. 🐎
You’re welcome 🙂
Well done, Selma! 😊
Thanks, 🤗
My pleasure.
This is lovely, it has a wonderful flow.
Thanks. Melissa. 🤗