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Eventide and Tinge of Ebb and Flow #TankaTuesday #SynonymOnly

Ebb & Flow

no
matter
how much we
try to prolong
the day to make it
last longer, eventide
arrives bearing nuances
of untrammeled virtues, in tones
of splendidly tinged life lessons that
add wisdom on the most trifling of us
until we come to see our uniqueness
not sabotaging the ebb and flow
that gets us closer to the sky
where we embrace our essence
face to face reflected
in our human-ness
to help us thrive
in the waltz
of each
hour

***
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Today I share a double Etheree poem: Ebb & Flow, written for
WordCraft: Prose and Poetry where Twilight and Hue are the words
for the synonyms only challenge.

THE RULES: 
Write a poem using a syllabic form of your choice found on the cheatsheet OR
from Poetscollective.org. Remember, you can’t use the two words.
Instead, find synonyms for those words and incorporate them into
your poetry.

Photo: Image by Sasin Tipchai from Pixabay 
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This Post Has 19 Comments

  1. Manja Maksimovič

    Lovely. Looks like life itself, like that twirly toy that kids used to twirl.

  2. Colleen M. Chesebro

    Selma, this double Etheree is absolutely fabulous. These life lessons are wearing me out! LOL! 😀 <3

    1. Selma Martin

      You did? Aww, mi’lady. Thanks for this.
      The lessons that are right for you will remain. Don’t worry. Universe is just doing her job. 😀
      Blessings to you. Stay sweet.

  3. JoAnna

    Beautiful and thought provoking! I’ve always been a night owl, often trying to prolong the day, but then I sleep late in the morning. I love this part: until we come to see our uniqueness, accepting the natural ebb and flow….

    1. Selma Martin

      Night-owling— me too. 😆 🙈
      So happy you saw some wisdom in that section. Thank you, dear friend.

  4. SamSahana

    What a wonderful poem! Loved the format and the “pattern” it turned out to be.

    1. Selma Martin

      Aww,Sam. Thanks. It’s a lovely format, this one – invites the other senses to notice. Glad you saw it’s curving form and thought it lovely.
      Your message empowers me, young lady. Stay lovely.
      I’m running late ⏰ this day. I will arrive at yours later. Wait for me 😃.
      Thanks for the visit and comment.

  5. -Eugi ☕️

    Beautiful and love the last lines –
    to help us thrive
    in the waltz
    of each
    hour
    ❤️

    1. Selma Martin

      Hey, Eugi. Thanks for the visit. It’s perfect— makes my day even more precious. Thanks and glad you liked that last part. Be well. xoxo

  6. Elizabeth

    Wow, Selma, it is wonderful. You wrote a poem in a story format, love the flow.

    1. Selma Martin

      Thanks for that “wow”
      Made my day. Thanks for the visit. Glad you enjoyed it. 😉 xo

  7. D.L. Finn, Author

    Beautiful I love the thought of embracing our essence!

  8. Kathryn LeRoy

    This is one (of many) favorites of your poems. You always make me think and bring wonder to my day.

    1. Selma Martin

      You say the nicest things to me. It’s encouragement I value. Thanks so much, Kathryn. I appreciate you. xo

  9. Ingrid

    Such wonderful healing words Selma! I felt this today whilst walking above the sea 😊

    1. Selma Martin

      That ebb and flow, we need it. Glad you read, dear Ingrid. And thanks for the comment. Blessings.

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