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24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge No. 35, 5/21/24, Part I, Fine Weather 

“…and the blue sky
was awash with 
colorless peacocks,” 

~ Kenji Miyazawa, Preface to Spring and Ashura
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This week for #TankaTuesday we’re in the second week of the season of Fine
Weather: May 20 – June 5, as we follow the 24 Seasons of Japan. The dates are
based off of the lunisolar calendar, often called an agricultural calendar. The
traditional Chinese and Japanese lunisolar calendar divides a year into 24
solar terms.

This is the first week of Fine Weather in the Northern Hemisphere.

Your syllabic poetry writing invitation is to choose a kigo word or phrase from the
seasonal kigo list on the post. Or you can select from the summer category, for the
Northern Hemisphere, or the kigo words that work for the Southern Hemisphere.
Use the 500 Kigo Words on the kigo word list links below. Share your kigo word on
your post. If you write freestyle poetry, you must share a syllabic form, that
includes a kigo word.
You must use one kigo word or phrase in your syllabic poem. If you share a kigo word or

phrase in your freestyle poem, you must include a kigo word or phrase in your syllabic
poem.
You DO NOT have to write a haiku. You can create a poem from the 24 forms listed.

(We all know only haiku and haibun require kigo season words). This challenge uses the
kigo words for inspiration.
Fine weather all around. Photo by Selma
Earth Green, Sky Blue

A change
of wear for when
earth is green, sky is blue
and empty, empty is
the sky for sky
larks to

fly through.
Thrilled with the warmth
of May is the moth that
is a flower--rich with
June's oath. My heart
grows wings.

And when
summer sizzles
and it’s too hot to breathe
I will think of blue skies,
handsome weather
of spring.

© selma
Kigo: change of wear, blue skies
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“A Badger’s Hexastich consists of six lines written in 2-4-6-6-4-2 syllables per line.
It is unrhymed with optional rising and falling end-words, which I think is an
interesting twist. Don’t forget to add a title.”
~ Colleen

Thanks for reading and may you have blue skies too.
HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY.

Selma Martin
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This Post Has 40 Comments

  1. rajkkhoja

    Beautiful photo Earth Green, Sky Blue. So nice words written in poem. I like. Excellent photography. Selma

    1. Selma Martin

      Excited to know you liked this one too, Raj. Happy Sunday.

      1. rajkkhoja

        Yes,I love & like one. Thanks, Selma

  2. Sadje

    So beautifully written my friend 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

      1. Sadje

        You’re very welcome ☺️

  3. Ingrid

    Always think of blue skies, Selma! 🌺 😊

  4. beth

    a lovely ode to spring, selma

  5. dorahak

    Captures the essence of spring so naturally, this imagery of sense and feeling. How lovely, Selma!

    1. Selma Martin

      Summer will sizzle. I’m sure I’ll be wishing for spring… so glad you enjoyed it, Lauren. Bless you. Hope all’s well with you. I’m catching up finally. It never is fun being sick. I’m still hoarse and have recovered my appetite. and being allergic to penicillin as I am, the new meds hurt my stomach so much. Not pleasant.
      Bless you dear Lauren. And good night from me. 🤗

      1. Oh, I’m so sorry you’ve been sick, Selma. Just take care of you, my friend, and feel better soon. Sending healing hugs your way. xo

    1. Selma Martin

      Yes yes. Blue skies pinken 🩷 our mood 🤣 always.

  6. Colleen Chesebro

    Fabulous, Selma! I love how summer brings out the emotions in you! “Handsome weather and blue skies!”

    1. Selma Martin

      So blue that you feel cozy and pink inside. Right?! Right 👏🏽 thanks for the lovely prompt dear Colleen.

      1. Colleen Chesebro

        Yes! The blue is so brilliant that it makes you feel all warm inside. I totally understand that feeling, Selma. 🩵

    1. Selma Martin

      Aww, Bella. I appreciate you saying g this. Thanks. Glad you liked it.

  7. msjadeli

    Selma, your affection for the season comes through quite beautifully.

    1. Selma Martin

      I’m thrilled you could feel “the happy” 😃 Lisa. Blessings.

  8. memadtwo

    That’s a wonderful sky to match your words.

  9. Smitha V

    Loved the vivid imagery, Selma. Your poem made me want to fly like the skylarks across a clear blue sky.

    1. Selma Martin

      Fly like the skylarks. Me too. Not many fluffy things around. Perfect really.

    2. Selma Martin

      Smitha. Is your website being funny. I tried to read yours from the link you shared on Mr. Linky. But couldn’t.
      These days it’s not easy finding everyone on WordPress. 😔
      I’ll try to read again in the morning. Bless you.

      1. Smitha V

        I have no idea, Selma. Do check again or else I’ll uploaded it to Mr. Linky again. Thanks so much, Selma, for taking the trouble to do it. XXX

  10. brazannemuse

    Oh the handsome weather of spring, it is just the best! Really enjoyed this ….
    💞Suzanne

  11. judeitakali

    Oh my! these are bombastic hexastiches. i could read this a hundred times over.

    1. Selma Martin

      You’re just too kind. But thanks. Bombastic! Is You!!

  12. willowdot21

    Oh! Selma this is beautiful, like the sky in your phone….I feel peace and warmth reading this 💜💜

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